Looking for some feedback on a sound effects project.

I'm compiling a portfolio (in my case that's music and audio post stuff - ie sound effects) of my work and would like some feedback on the most recent thing I have done.

Basically I took the Rat Transformation scene from Parasite Eve and replaced all the sound effects with ones that I recorded myself.

Here is the result!And here's the original for comparison.

Please, any and all feedback is appreciated.