@mrburger said:
@Hunter5024 By the way, I wrote this a year or two ago. I've since switched to using Repels.
And guys, I'm not trying to push everybody's buttons, I'm sorry. I forget my place. Back when I wrote this, it was just a creative exercise (I'm an aspiring writer, laugh all you want), and I just wanted to practice focusing on things I hated about a thing I loved. I'm in year five of a serious relationship, (again, laughter) so it's useful to do this type of thing, for me; it's like good, ah, psychological practice, kind of. Do you follow? Sometimes you feel like you hate a thing you love, and it's confusing, and it's good to talk it out (and draw pictures). It's also good to do it about Pokemon and not about your significant other. The post never asserts whether or not Pokemon is a good game, btw, or a bad game. I know it doesn't because I'm its author and I know my own personal stance on Pokemon's objective quality is: complicated.
The problem, if you ask me, is how much like a pretentious asshole you sound, even if you didn't intended to do it. Pointing out why a game is bad or what needs changing is OK. Telling others what to do or what to think, or even assuming that they do or think so is incredibly annoying. You say you wants to be a writer. Do you think you'll take criticism worded in this fashion so well? I don't think so. Don't directly and openly antagonize your readers if you don't want to "push their buttons". Or if you want to be so categoric about it, use the first person and assume full responsbility for the things you hate, don't transmit it to a reader who may feel offended for those assumptions.
Believe it or not, the way you deliver your message can be as important as the message itself.
Needless to say, no. I love everything you say I hate about Pokémon.
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