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theredcoat24

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I’m planning on doing thing online where I use video games to teach historical stuff via pictures / info and I need some feed back on how it looks so far

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Too much on screen. Too busy. Font spanning across different colors of the background make clean looks difficult, due to changing contrast; hard on the eyes. Consider splitting up the paragraphs into more digestible segments (i.e. part shows up, goes away, next part shows up). Separated highlight color ("Call of Duty" "(2003)" "US Campaign" etc.) looks tacky and harsh. If you want to use background highlight, just make a solid box.

Think more minimalistic and incorporate the least amount of change on one shot as possible.

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Uneven bulletpoints look untidy TBH

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Is this intending to be a powerpoint or a video? In both instances, you'd be talking through points that maybe don't need screen space.